Day2

I'm having a lot of trouble with the preface for my book the first half i'm really excited about but the second half....

Here's what the first half looks like:

In the darkness the creature slept; paralyzed and imprisoned. Knowing, but not moving. It would stay forever in the darkness until its soul was made whole. It seemed asif the creature would forever wait the one that could finally release it from its slumber. Its fiery rage made heat radiate around its body. It seemed as if the creature would never be free.... until now.

(I know what the picture is, but I thought it kinda worked for this concept.)